The roots and stems reach and sing towards the sun
I look behind me waiting for your voice
the tall flowing reeds whisper sweet nothings
I look behind because I cannot look ahead
the wind caresses my red dress like an old dream
I turn with my body, but my shredded heart
knows the truth
knows the truth
the sky laughs at my foolish steps
my eyes gaze out yearning for your silhouette
for there is no regret
only the elements witness my torment
they are my solace
I come here for the sky,
the roots,
the stems,
the reeds,
and the wind
the roots,
the stems,
the reeds,
and the wind
feel you
wandering these lonely realms
tempted to return to us again.
Kori 2011
wandering these lonely realms
tempted to return to us again.
Kori 2011
Such a beautifully sad and longing feeling this poem emits. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteHere is my story for week 8: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/
the last two lines just killed me. i love these sad/sweet poems. great write!
ReplyDeleteamazing imaginations, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sad!
ReplyDeleteSad reflection and sense of longing ...
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quite wonderful! I love the imagery you've painted! well done :-)
ReplyDeleteyour words fly.
ReplyDeletelovely story in poetic form.